Skip to main content

Search the Special Collections and Archives Portal

ent001486-058

Image

File
Download ent001486-058.tif (image/tiff; 98.7 MB)

Information

Digital ID

ent001486-058
Details

Publisher

University of Nevada, Las Vegas. Libraries

FREEMAN COMPANY pub/ic/sts PLAN PAGES 10 AND 11 1. This looks pretty good as it is, although I suggest deleting the right-hand black margin marked "A". 2. I would also suggest making the left-hand black panel, marked "B", in YELLOW rather than black, for a reason you will soon see. 3. I suggest more yellow and blue arrows inside the diagramatic sketch to identify the copy contained in the left-hand panel and the bottom panel. For instance, where you have material on "meeting rooms" in the left-hand panel, which I recommend to be a yellow background, there should be yellow arrows pointing to all the meeting rooms. 4. And where you have material contained in the blue panel at the bottom talking about "storage and maintenance areas,"I suggest you have blue arrows pointing to these spaces right on the map. 5. The big, red headline running across the right-hand side of the page is fine, but if it is to be red, that means another color, which I think we should have, and I think here we should also run in a bold sub-head from other technical points that Elmo brought out. 6. Reconsidering, I think we should elaborate on the headline marked "C", perhaps to read something like: ft 9508 WIL SHIRE BLVD. ?╟≤ BEVERLY HILLS, CAL. ?╟≤ BRADSHAW 2-8611